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Old 03-27-2008, 12:48 PM   #15 (permalink)
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Default Re: Let me know what you think of my photos.

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Originally Posted by Macky View Post
pic 1 - this would have worked if the background was blurred out. next time, try using a larger aperture. the subject (to me) is pretty obvious (nice bright colored red circular seat), the background just doesnt do it justice. you followed the rule of thirds here quite well - subject is off center in the lower third of the shot.

pic 2 - very nice depth of field. had you followed the same with #1, it would have been better.

pic 3 - nearly made the mistake of getting everything dead center. good thing part of it (the red hand) is at the uppermost part.

pic 4 - the Viper really stands out. bright colors and muted periphery. the tree actually frames the car quite well. only distracting part is the word "sharp" but otherwise this is the best of this series.

pic 5 - the branches floating in mid air on the upper right are too distracting. id clone them out to finish off this frame.

Thanks, this really helps me a lot.

David
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